A SUMMARY OF AN ODE TO THE BLACKHILL

ON THE WAY BACK TO HEAVEN


“On the Way Back to Heaven” deals with the journey of a soul from Earth to Heaven and various setbacks that it faced in the earthly reality. The poet in this book has tried to deceive the lord just to witness the pleasure of hell which has cost him much to his expectation.
In the first stanzas of the poem, we can scrutinize the falsehood that the poet bores within himself. The poet has displayed his wish to view the inventor's creation and tried to convince that after his demise he shall be the part of lord again as the inmates of Black Hill exhibits their responsibility towards their Motherland. {In above statement there is a touch of irony because the inmates of Black Hill have never shown any responsibility towards their land, and it is they who have brought disgrace.}

The poem is partly based on fiction and some parts convey the real aspect of the Black Hill. It is to be understood that the poetry is bound within the four walls of Rhenock and nothing has been extracted from the outer sources. In the poetry one finds that Rhenock is painted to tremendous height and sometimes even compared to heaven. The day today experiences of the poet have been depicted in the poetry. But the negligence of the authorities, inmates and the aliens elements to his land has in fact inspired him to sketch the poetry. Though Rhenock bores a glorious past, her soil has always been a part of background. In the present scenario of Sikkim, the great literary genius has explored the beauty of the state, but the poet is sad to say that none could smell the fragrance of heaven.

Many stanzas of the poem elaborate the Black Hill to have some connection with the lords and the Heaven. For example in the third stanzas, the lord has promised the poet the earthly bliss, but he was blessed neither the English soil nor the Eternal city; instead he was send to the Black Hill. Here come the philosophical aspect of the poetry, if a child want to visit a new place and seeks a permission to do so, the parents says, that child should reside in the abode of his relatives, nor in the place where he is not secured. Similarly the lord has fulfilled the desire of the poet to view the earthly pleasure in the Black Hill, for land replicates the heaven and the poet too is no away from the heaven’s jurisdiction.

An ode to the Black hill

ON THE WAY BACK TO HEAVEN

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On a foul promise wondered almighty!
Posthumously, within you’ll mingle
Execute inmates, as onus to Black Hill.
But deep-depth masked a futile truth
For mortal glee to view,
With chortle, dunce a planner cared
Whim pleased mine hiatus less.
Its fetter from lousy air, as fugitive felt,
Was his the last laugh?
Clause imposed, indeed an omniscient rogue
As rave fetes expectation flush,
Fastidious to gratify effortless as, haughty ideas rise,
To compromised, compelled humanity
In bliss, as Steward‘ll born.
As questioned acquised in the dock
Too in heaven an authentic echo
Seeks from you an incorriable lord,
Joyous and extremity you glimpsed
With‘ur debacle”ll soaked.
Hobbled not me as endless Adam and Eve,
Seemed though proffer trumpery may
Taste of wrong dissolved high.
Melody its loudness as panacea,
Though mine abulia heeled,
Sweated woeful eyes a mix blessing!
Blessed not the English soil.
Lord mine Queen, The blue blood
Neither supplanted the English prince,
Nor of Eternal city right of tenancy,
Pride of nation “THE GREAT WALL’’
As if ample glimpse.
Awaits me nor the Indian cotton field,
In oceanic fuel I plow neither
Mine wish to torpedo, Black Hill ladder shown.
Called upon specters on a trial day,
Scanned with shrew its hellions action,
Tumultuously welcomed diverse breeds
Fades the rays the relentless sun.
Too was present an unborn soul,
Eavesdrops the secret hearing
Marked none its present though,
In a boredom court of justice.
Soaring stake pays amongst the inquisitive dupes
As lethal wave, sales its frivolous deeds
Black Hill next batten.
From hell they cruised,
Remorseless stood ‘th bizarre,
Self important plunk, where nature odd,
Some out of dread grasped,

Cold some lingered
Beloved hell! Wish it conferences,
Loyalist, from the Black land.
Almighty! Encounters now a slum dweller
Too he dwelled the Black Hill,
Pledge cautiously!
Twins blood in who’s vains run,
Pure and holy as twenty Ganges rinse.
An honour indeed was
To scan sagacious man,
Equals guardian! In grade,
Partly sin difused, unburdened he the Black Hill,
Fell from brow as unguent,
An uncouth sweat.
From lord sight desertered the hell's spirit,
To elucidate fear, chamber mine pierced.
Hymns of survival Displayed
His insolence to atone,
Endure men with no sin where?
Rivet your mind though specters speech,
Secret trial once eavesdropped,
To hell next you lured
Rises were mercies limited of lord.
Of heaven’s slothfulness desired retreat,
The palsy hearts were breeds,
To the land never tried dreams,
You, why of ascetic dear?
As cherished the winter’s heat
The stray beasts,
Breath the lungs, the heaven's air.
Knows, what you omitted in
Eternal struggle?
Of its legacy is proud,
The Employs of Center.
To gold, circuitously is proportion to Attested,
For eight marvel words
Over takes the woe,
Hemlock as if them pleads to drink.
Thy hand that grip the golden pen,
Hikes the price by lone mistake.
Self they burden for the slog in weight
Treasured ones cannot they offend.
Heaven, though hell to Black Hill I born,
Dual hell! Assumed why?
As auk, could pierced to trumpery land,
For excruciating play, revealed though
The hell’s ladder,
Cost lakh too a monster death.
A derelict was I, innate as novice,
Black Hill though no genial for linger,
“As Sadder, but Wiser died.”
Behest unborn soul, for was devoid,
Itself from bind to free.
Tyro was he to the Black Hill
As bride to paradise.
Adam Smith, Allexis De Tocqueville,
Immanuel Kant, and Plato
Earthly theories imagined,
Scantly exposed the Black Hill’s funds
Colossal, garish portrait of politics.
To globe displayed, inventor’s beauty missed.
Institute nature, gasps where political ghouls
Through seven fire rounds,
Lass to female changed.
Borrowed, if ballot of Black Land
Premise they offered to globe,
Would acquire spare fame.
Diabolic lads of hell
For its yeoman services renowned,
The son of heaven’s beauty
Famed simply,

Mounts science of politics
As appeals, evil within,
Fritters for the same, those acquires wings.

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Music with supper the horde engaged,
Months later the earthly warden,
Intrude, unexpected, the novice to glance, acclaimed.
Kissed its physic with glee,
Till blushed to cheek fetched.
Shall heel the soles from stamping floor,
In prophetic mood
Vixens matured, yelled!
Sun, moon and stars,
Miraculous emerged and far.
Bare was the escape to dirt,
Heaven’s retreat beloved.
Dreamt a vision for heaven’s leave,
Rest in grave, around kinsmen sensed.
Favourism the vague land, then
Miracle seven merit acclaims.
Mankind egotist and weird,
As Guilty pleasure, inmates.
Nuisance rather consent was,
Loud in provisos of lord,
Retaliation was for low act,
Alike vagrant, emerged in glorious shed.
Am I not weep while upset or heat felt?
Born am I not of mother’s womb?
Appreciate dust while loss kisses.
Advance neither mine censured, the rustic life,
Quivered the land nor,
A core in awe and mercy roared,
Neither a trip delayed.
Knew lord, sightless cared
By sadistic souls, can’t so fetal be,
Sketched prior to I respire,
Hell promised, fudged though,
Acquainted to abode inferior
Where trade shabbily a swarthy fellow.
Howled as mastiff when snobbish male,
Adore recalled of Heaven’s beast.
Dominant tender hands halt some timed,
Eternal plenteous,
Insolent teen, he truly skilled.
No soul grips the youth like I weld,
Beside bliss, delight was mine land,

As leaves in autumn swept,
Hurried I to progressive land.
But bothered me more was the bell,
Neglects never its charm,
Mine infancy cultured elsewhere of land,
Swells memories fewer in those times,
Air of sanctity to appreciate
When sensible, to prospect heaven’s soil.
Grin imported so do elation and pride,
Raced the knoll for domestic bliss,
Mine pace as hasty creek, delays none
But Adamant I remained as an apoplectic sufferer,
Gulp as if it’s blood.
Quivered then mine childhood tree,
Dropped its leaves a tear of joy.
An aura stained of the land you left,
Wherefore she moans?
Shrivel flavor of mire within her son,
And mine rigor ends.
Brief detailed, mine bride exertion clogged,
Heard she in heaven dwells.
Devoid deftness with no brawl won,
End behold her ventures too.
Dwelled we heaven abode,
As an August beauty lightened.
Unveil lord, for pivotal task born,
Heaven’s access if pierced,
Quivered as echo.
Fiends’ mascaras speeded,
Prettiness frightful, throne they aimed,
Seeked shelter few dispersed flea,
Bewitched in love agreed,
In the Black Hill‘ll dwell,
Lord! Red in rage cursed me.
As polish dunes boundless,
In hell soul mine endless flushed,
Flapped she in finer pinnacles
Bleak her renaissance seems.
Dared storm in stanch ground, but upset none,
A humanity flood sunk her pride,
As summer to winter changed
And scorch spring autumns song,
But cold I lingered,
Heaven to hell its journey stared.
Paradise trouble tumbles tear,
Her radiance, her flight
Expired in ceaseless gale.
Mother if not betrayed you,

One’ll be amongst the impudent troops
To parade it’s flair in Mayhem land.
Vacillates the Sun to burn, and twilight tedious,
Hovels to swindle a malicious swine.
Spares non a malefactors,
Mine soil richly exposed,
Would‘ve enticed me,
Them in compliance escorted,
Ardent thoughts if not roused.
Desire I not to assault you
Through horrid speech,
Deceived who offers dialect,
Executed viciously guards legacy,
Crimson thine soil turned.
Now Plods mine land, the slayer!
Entire earth that torments,
Howling pierces the castles,
The burial ground graphs the dawn.
In soothing sleep rests,
The wardens! Victim of concealed death,
Profuse loss where never knew,
Improves heat with parting song.
From callousness of society, away I paced
In a meek abode where guiltless air gusts,
Murkiness though inquiries mine escape,
Ruptured mine trance a pricey rays.
Bullion turned a windowpanes,
Mine heart leapt, fiend big emerged
In gold cleanse as arduous bee.
In whet white clad, a core exposed,
With conceit tales, her beauty enriched.
When equated her grace
To soil nameless,
Patches countless dwells.
Grips Odium, sin, and acute dotage,
Implicit once its sanctity and
Hymns scorch, salvation to soul gained.
No in land trouble resides,
To West retreats the burning heat
For placid day, exhaust its shine,
Twice Sun blessed, quiet and courteous
Shines to extra land.
Blazed globe and travels,
Mine soil pierce no its emissions.
Virtue and impiety, innate elements,
By first absorbed, low vigor
To mine soil resumed, years to shine.
Through perilous power gleams
For Black Hill, embraces no glow of own,

Leased where from callous spirit,
Untainted Land and air,
Plays the Sun a crucial role.
Away I wander in fragile soil,
Marvel merit Center has,
Realized never, to hell innate
Mighty her alluring strength.
Youth’s delight; adore, affluence and wine,
Cannot for shabby land offend?
Unwinds while town its urban charm,
Observes calm, mine love hikes.
As all sways in lark’s tune,
Bolt I, by rented voice,
Expansion cuff induce sleep,
Depleted ozone ripeness sells.
A deceit free thine soil,
Fetches turmoil to rural populace.
Assist dew-drops no foliage growth,
Yoke is instead, respites in green,
Pink and Rosy crest.
Inmates alike, dissolve thine mount,
Trade coyness though heaven’s tear.
If in me pride resides, is sin!
The same mine mother innate virtuous it be.
Is futile to extol, Sun with courteous waves,
Lacks, though has valid to rise,
Of the elapsed care wasted.
Fragrance of your dust
Esteem at extreme West,
Strange to urbane,
Mask you ample mine olden pride.
In disgrace I stares the mode of passage,
Pleads for verdict the pending cases.
Hallowed is British of Shakespeare’s dawn,
Staged though mediocre play,
Mine land too his bent chased,
The kilos of brass is trivial
To half the load of gold,
While in gold, tinted both,
Visionless beast balances the might.
Acquires elation me in mine soil
Nix soul witness in its land,
Drops of blood proffer a golden coin,
By taste of thine dust.
Hassles barely the effect, of isolated throngs,
Colossal pride suffers till dust kiss,
Bestows mirth or rage while mother bless,

Shrewdness they gained!
Though as pugnacious outlived,
Echoed if mother’s voice,
Superior sin as deception sinks.
Valiant Feural for mother’s love
Yet in German’s soil resides,
Its job, while endorsed Globe as “Feral Plague”,
Nil soul as Feural, prized its land.
Lord! Knock me off not from the pedestal,
In a materialistic society I relax,
Alone you respires in bliss, I scout,
Yearn company thine soul and call valued.
The realm I lost is alike the realm I triumph,
Mine land comfy seems,
All past luster’s a human desire to gain,
Thy adore’ll be ignored, ahead thee rest my land.
Assure me; of beast’s love’ll be free,
Shall curse instantly, on Black Hill’ll dwell,
Moment you learn, I deceived thee.
No for chattels I sketch mine verse,
I crave for praise, and no painless earn.
Ample I stare mine land,
Dismal core what desires?
Prior to mine leave let me sight the Pluto first,
A dwarf planet deemed.
If its axis shaped, grade and assets begs
Mine death immortal be………!

I WAS IN LOVE FOR A DAY!!

What exotic beauty you shaped lord?
Merely with eyes and mind is to stare her.
By no destiny and labor earned,
To walking death, aside I sat and gaze.
My adore knew would short live,
Hence these phrases I approved
“Beauty is to stare and griped
The gracious fades”.
Let me waste my truth and
Rest in nature’s frame,
Shelter even to planner barred.

When angels wrought in human form,

The hectic dupe, claims it existences,

The breeze that enlarges my lungs,

Pollutes, when strive to influence my love

How the trait of humans impure the divine source?

Alike dirt in threshold buries,
Hides mine heart the love sometimes.
In absurd tunes of bird counter souls,
Mine covet rushes, in search of love.
With divine mirth ’m rooted to depth
The beauty I trance is to lose.
If valued she for no proceeds,
For her love mine soul is pity!
In inner mind she does consider,
While he loves not as me.
In nature’s flair I fail to admire her,
With slyness if she is triumph,
Would I not replicate her love?

 From harlotry obtain the secret delight

I behest the nature to unveil her,
Thy allure needs attention soon!
Ahead time corrode thy grace.
Oh! I knew why sun’s worth wane?
The heat that gleams the globe,
Extols covertly mine love.
The anguish I smell in brittle souls,
Engaged to best creation,
None for its trade regrets.
All evil spirits are exorcised by the holy prayers,
Mine sacred love but fails
To eradicate the portrait of her love.
I don’t know lord in what shape and
Size you reside in the earth?
Some worship the celestial strength,
While few carves the boulder to smear thine present.
Should have blessed with dual core,
One that esteems her love, an extra should outcast.

MINE SOUL IF NOT MINE

Lord, I denial jealously to mine soul,

Instantly it has enhanced to flee,

No flame and flood can raze,

Feeble, neither is mine righteous soul.

Oh! I’m not jealous to find mine soul

Enclosed next to the earthly angels,

Or when handles the car free of EMI.

Brilliantly, rather I costume my soul,

In the world of neatness.

Mine soul exists to salvage mine dream,

While all human feats halts in graves,

I’m hallowed by such divinity,

Mine flesh stagnant and soul active.

Of what immoral act mine soul exiled?

Core immaturity is no truth,

To covert pitch the body performs,

Else, the case has no allure to act.

Divine heat of sun is no act of Corona,

The vital strength of hydro- helium,

Unaided propagates the heat.

For it covetousness, to earn adore of lord,

As traitor retreat from the globe,

Curse the height an impair cloud,

It’s the soul that’s tough,

Yet again, earth greets the rain.

The weary shell of volcanoes

Fails to restrain the fury of soften lava,

Too is thin Mine depressed shell,

To confine the flee of mine soul.

Amply it strangle in lenient case,

But to parasite’er had grouse.

I‘m bestowed to failure,

Each time admired the lord’s enormity,

And of mine pitiable structure

Is lord’s grave error.

If the soul was an outer case,

And within acted body,

Its worth would’ve quiver,

The land of plenty.

Oh! I’m pity for mine poor soul,

For it rested years unnamed,

So frail was mine act,

Amongst dupe couldn’t make it wise.

These days mine body is sure

To brew a course, for marvel soul to prove,

As I reject the premises of facts,

Those who adores the wisest fool,

Are fools in the world of innovation.

Mine body uphold the stable heat

Yet mine soul active.

You don’t respire the equal air as I do,

Else the howl of mine body would’ve deafened you.

I’m in quest of a scientist of an immense grade,

Who’d craft a vigour gravitational force,

Advanced than that survives,

For sin of ignorance, to exile the tyrant.

Let mine dismay be thy failure,

Once I cremate the centenarian ravage

Then’ll rouse mine aversion to immense height,

For superiority clash, respite within me

A mighty soul, to restrain thy influence.

I’m not bothered by thy prior act,

The body can still resist thy ignorance.

Let mine soul be untouched,

Of thy jealously I’m scared.

While you shaped the male,

Least you appreciate it greatness.

Now vital is to curtail thy flourish

Several ruined, yet no miracle ensured

Thy overthrown disciples failed,(Means the nature calamities)

To restore thy eminence.

I favour to raze mine soul in hell

Then to reside in bliss and cherish thee,

Each daylight would be in grief,

Mine eyes when find thee close.

Now improve the limit of the sky,

As you’ve ample age to maintain.

If average can raid thy shield steadily,

Than think of a livid soul, curious to amend thee.

Of mine humiliations you ought to wage plenty,

Let mine hatred against thy widen so immense,

Mine soul with its rage’ll furnish its glaze.

The fumes of revulsion has fouled the heaven,

The movement in the shell is inevitable,

Soon’ll   triumph the earth.

I must reveal the expansion of mine soul

Craft the height, superior than Everest,

Heat more than Sun can generate,

And Ocean intense as Men’s head.

Thy poor creation cannot balance

Mine impressive soul, when escapes.

When earth was lately shaped

Lord was valued by diverse soul

Thy trade with common was usual.

But of human displeased nature

Now wisely, allocates its asset,

Prefer few for thy blessing.

Thy sacred disciples reach the common,

Simply to assure thy presents,

If man was curved in the face of lord,

Why majority lacks blessing?

These days the earth has narrow its offering

As mine dreams firm to defeat the creator.

Mine soul for sure is better in grade,

The body would’ve suffered least,

Had I heed to its prior call.

If to wage a war against the lord,

Is the war against the fate,

Shall not prevent mine soul,

If war retorts mine disgrace,

To shed the blood of mine fate.

I was bland in the reign of lord,

Now fearless to inform thy,

No clean element in globe, then mine soul subsists,

Even the impure lord, adored in varied mode.

Though it may upset, who conceal their dead,

But to cease the tyrant,

Vital is to exhume the grave.

I doubt, why beauty yearn

To anticipate in mine struggle?

If lord graphs a treachery,

Vital role shall women perform.

Is the vanity of women,

Often fence their expansion

A laboured men dwells the mind.

What’s the use as gnomes, lying in grave?

Transmit greed, to soul that endure least,

To avenge disgrace, mend the soul,

Awaits bliss, to trust thy failure. (the powerful soul rests peacefully in heaven discussing ones failure, but it is time to struggle for the last time and to listen your previous failures the heaven can wait for some time) 

 To parade the worth, the globe is true to all

Improve’ur soul, for the final clash,

And I assure the quality struggle,

Mine heroes are trained to defy the lord,

Its rage requires the fortune to hunt.

Shall arid the lane with tireless slogans,

Dull soul, boycott mine stride.

Long back foretold the superior breeds

Mine soul’ll ruin the illicit fates,

No priest’ll perform the holy rites.

Now equipped with the war of weapons,

To cease the inner man of straw.

Reinforce to sacrifice,

The struggle that casts no blood,

Or enquires the innocent tear.